Darrelle Revis

good start. I think text could be better, and I think left side is a little plain

 

I think you added stuff just because it looks cool. It all doesn't flow though. I would just trash this and start over

 

nah dont trash it, it just doesn't seem finished and unblended. maybe work alittle more on it

 

The coloring sucks, and the right side has no flow.