Sorry, I'm not feeling this one a whole lot. The BG is too plain, spice it up with some better brushes [Deviant Art] It's just too dull right now, not very appealing if you know what I mean. And I don't like the text on V1. Look at some other walls for better text ideas, and try all the different blending options. Cropping needs some touching up too.Keep working on this, you will get better.
