^^^I dsagree, I like the text.I think the scan lines are wayyyyyy tooooo strong.They kill the sig, lower them, an dpost a v2 pleasse.Maybe just take them out all together.
I don't like the text and how it does that strange overlapping. The scan lines kill this sig and there seems to be nothing going on in your BG's. Add some contrast or something.. darken them up maybe.