Air Fresh and Swish15 have both been selected as the wild card contestants for round 1. You have approximately 24 hours to get your rhymes in for the battle. After the battle, we will have the people vote, just like in the other battles, and the winner will move on to the second round, while the loser is eliminated. Whoever posts first will land the first blow. Good luck to all, and have fun. Air Fresh vs Swish15
Before we begin, Air Fresh just beware By the time I'm done, you'll be gasping for fresh air I need to win, and I'll do whatever it takes These is serious now, you can't afford mistakes No more time for jokes or messing around This isn't a game, I'm coming back with a new sound This freestyle is so hot it might just melt you see Air Fresh, your just a notch in the belt I'm going to Round Two, you just wait and see Any round with vcwannabe deserves me I'll be the hunter and you be the prey I'm going to own you worse than Umair with MrJ I'm like Jordan, and your like Sam Bowie No matter what you spit, it just won't outdo me I'm 100% focused and I got the desire If you question or doubt me, it'll just fuel the fire This is a one man show, much like your team in Philly I'm coming out on top, even if it kills me I lost in Round One, no excuses or blames But now I'm back to kick ass and I'm taking down names You can't stop me, you can only hope to contain But this is the start of my reign, it's time to entertain Compared to me, your Darko, and I'm King James I just cannot fail, I must prevail Now go change your name from Air Fresh to Air Stale
I no ya boy got more nick names then The Black Mamba Ima bout to drop a bomb on yall, but my name aint Bin Laden A young kid like Dylan in the house "I spit hot fire" like I gotta flame thrower in my mouth Swish for you this battle ain't looking too great I'ma take over the game like I was #eight Even if you find a way to get ahead of me, I'll come back with a Flash cause I play with the Heat For this wild card battle, you know I had to come correct I dare anybody on this board to give my rhymes a test Because I'm telling you man I can freestyle with the best I ain't Diesel but its like I got an S on my chest My word are like bullets better pull out ya vest cause if you don't, I'll be a ref and hit you with a tech so don't get out of line, don't make the wrong move cause if you do, my team will be coming for you What am I even doing in a wild card competition? Is it just or did my last battle turn out like the dunk competition JBB Nate Robbed me but I ain't hatin Because this battle is mine, and mine for the takin JBB yall sleepin, I should change my name to George Mason Like George Mason, but Ima make it pass the final 4 I'm ready to play, JBB watch me jack up this score by the time this is all over, my fingers will be sore But a habit for rippin kids is somethin I cannot ignore It was all fun and games before, but now its time to settle the score Swish I heard a doctor say that your rhymes were sick, hope they get better you must have a cold, why don't you go put on a sweater? the thing is, you still wont be as hot as me however cause the same doctor told me all my rhymes are better Air Fresh baby, I'm still so sick like Ne-Yo throw your shots at me Swish, I'll dodge em like Neo My name ain't Leo but I'm the best kept secret I'm the best rapper in this battle, but thats just the way I see it I lost in the first round so nobody else is gonna beat me I'm back like crack sucka, come and get a piece Let da kid eat, I'm about to start my feast If you intterupt my meal, you'd better get to know defeat all you doubters might as well join my team casue I ain't loosing this time by any means
Alright Air Stale, I'll call you George Mason I guess a champ from Florida will knock you out again I'm from the Sunshine State, now crown me king Call me Joakim Noah and polish my championship ring This is my swamp, let's do the Gator chomp Air Stale's under my J's, about to get stomped Your not Ne-Yo, and you won't ever be The only thing you got in common is the fact that your lonely Your girl left you just to be with me I guess she wanted to be with the better MC You didn't get robbed like Nate, you just got outdone Take it like a man and quit crying son It's over now, your about to lose twice in a row First your hoe and now I take over the show? Whoa, you think you can handle this? They aren't screaming for you, they're screaming for Swish
I'm, Air Stale now. you must be kiddin! Swish I'm Fresher than you have ever been How am I stale, when I'm fresh all the time the only thing stale about all this battle , is your corny a** rhymes you from the Sunshine State but you have never shined because your the opposite of me when I spit my lines I told you in my first verse, I'm like GMU I said I'm making it past the Final 4, unlike you Eff a reptile chomp, I'm bout to have me some Gator soup and with the remains of that I'll make me some Gator Shoes How can I be under your J's, when you prolly don't have any Swish my Magic will put an end to your career, like you were Penny stop hatin on ya boy, I've been hot from the start Swish the only rings you got came out machines at K-Mart You should change your name to Brick cause you ain't connection no shots your right them people are screaming, they screamin "Swish Stop!"
You’re coming in here, saying my rhymes are corny? You’re talking about Gator soup and shoes in a rap tourney That's pathetic Stale, is someone running out of lines? I doubt you'll get near the Final Four with any of those rhymes That is, unless there's a Final Four for sore losers who whine In that case, I’ll put my money on you every time Did you just say, that I don't got a pair of J's? Come over to my crib, I'll let you rock my Team Reign's You see, I wear nice shoes so I look my best You wouldn’t understand since you shop at Payless What’s this about me not “connection” my shots? When I hit the court, I can’t be stopped I’ll swat you, cross you, and finger roll it for two Then the only person screaming “stop Swish” will be you Take over the game like #8? Let’s get some clarity Because the only #8 you resemble is Pat Garrity I know you’re getting nervous, starting to get a little stressed What did you expect, your battling against the best Don’t get fresh with me or I’ll make you pay I’m dominating this battle like Team USA
Everybody knows I'm sick on the Mic you a dumba**, probably don't even comprehend what I type I shop at payless, b**ch yeah right! 23's on my feet, whatcha kno bout some OG Mikes? You kno nuthing, talkin bout some Js who gives a F, about some sorry team reigns? come to your crib, what you tryin to get at? don't nobody want to come to ya crib, I ain't brokeback! you can't see me, call me John Cena If your dominating like USA, I'M ARGENTINA I'ma beat ya a** like Ike did Tina I'll blow you out like Hurricane Katrina, no homo, Swish you betta call Fema! there aint no way Ima run out of ish to say I'm like a generator b**ch I can flow for days you compared yourself to a gator so I talked about gator shoes and soup, step to me Swish and that WILL happen to you you tell me I wasn't robbed, what battle did you see? you know I got robbed, cause even YOU voted for Me I wouldn't have whined about me getting beat but for Azn to beat me he had to cheat I ain't worried about it no more I'm past defeat Do like MJ said, and "fail than suceed" If I lose this battle, it will be tragic Swish I'll bust 60 on ya like AI did the Magic So forget #8 my name aint Patric Every battle I'm in attracts a packed-house If you ever get ahead, I'll flagrant foul you like StackHouse I've got this battle already won you think it hurts now, the beatin has just begun when we are done, you'll get a chance to meet Big Pun no pun intended, when they ask me I about you I'll plead the fifth don't you understand I'm fresher than Will Smith I told you Swish, messin with me was your death wish you think this is sick, wait till you see my next feature I might sign up my lil sis for my next diss, even she could beat cha In this battle right now you can't handle me even my sister will kill you, lyricists run in my family don't even be like "you need your sister to battle me"? cause I can beat you single handedly light Swish up like he was a candle, g when I'm done I'll leave his a** in candle grease...... by the time this is over your record is 0 and 2 you from the Sunshine State, and I am too the only difference is Swish, I shine 10x's brighter than you. you think you can beat me you must be a fool when it comes to takin you, I'm drivin the bus to school Swish your not cool, stop talkin bout shoes I got 15 pairs literally, and your broke a** prolly got 2 don't call me a liar cause everthing I spit is true and with my last line I'ma say I'm way better than you
Ok well we each had three verses and he said he was done since he has work. I'm done too because I have to take my Drug and Alcohol test for my permit so let's start the voting.
Nothing against Air Fresh but I'm gonna have to go with Swish15. AF had some new material but it just seemed that Swish wanted it more, he had the desire to win and he showed it with the passion in his freestyle. Tough battle but I give the nod to Swish15.
I'm saying Swish, his lines hit harder and they were more memorable. This was a really close battle, Air Fresh and Swish both dropped consistent stuff, every verse was good, but I liked Swish's better.
Im voting for Air Fresh on this one both of them came with their best stuff, but Air Fresh just brought a little more at the end I felt.
Airfresh Airfresh is my favorite to win it all. weird cause i though asnsensation beat him in the first round. but i think he has the best flow. This was the best battle yet though. Swish was awesome too.
Im goin with Fresh..he seems to remind of Jae Millz by the way it flows in my head, with the italics and bold emphasized.
Ok...since I'm deadlocked, I'll break it down like this: 1. Originality ..../10 2. Rhyme Scheme ..../10 3. Creativity ..../10 4. Rebutals ..../10 5. Flow ..../10 <u>Air Fresh</u> 1. Originality 7.5/10 2. Rhyme Scheme 7/10 Although I felt most of your rhymes were basic, you did try to use some multi's at the end of your rhymes so I'll give you 7 in this. 3. Creativity 8/10 The metaphors you used against Swish were definetly standouts and took away from most of the other more simpler non-direct lines you had. I especially liked the first verse with the "bullets" and "ref" references, even though the whole gun thing is kinda played out. 4. Rebutals I liked your first and last rebuttal definetly. The middle one was just allright but the first and the last one were definetly on point. 7.5/10 5. Flow 8.5/10 Some parts of your raps didn't flow cause you used an incomplete flowing style (doing 3 bars of rhyming rather then 4), but other then that I thought you had a nice flow. Total: 38.5/50 -------------------------------------------------- <u>Swish</u> 1. Originality 8/10 I liked the fact that you opened up the battle really strong with your first verse and your direct hits (personals) were more so on point then his. 2. Rhyme Scheme 6.5/10 Same as AF, your rhyme scheme was moreso basic ("Two/you", "play, USA") and you didn't really use any multi's in your rhymes that stood out. 3. Creativity 9/10 I loved a lot of the lines in your replies, as many of the personals stood out more so then AF's in my opinion. 4. Rebutals Although your verses tended to be shorter, I loved the way you flipped the #8 line as well as the "stop Swish" line back on him. 8/10 5. Flow 7.5/10 Some parts of your raps didn't flow either ("Mason", "again"?) but overall while reading your rhymes, I could flow them in my head. However, I really felt the rhymes you used were quite basic. Total: 39/50 ------------------------------------------------------------------ OH MANNNN I wasn't counting the score as I was writing this post but Swish, you finished with 39, which means you pulled ahead. Final Vote: Swish This was an extremely tough battle to vote for and I have to say, the closest battle so far in the tourney. Good luck to both of you guys and whoever makes it will be a tough opponent for Chutney either way.
I thought it was pretty even, but I'm voting for Fresh because I think he came out on top of all of the back and forth stuff. Swish probably had some of the best lines of the battle, but overall Fresh did a better job of battling.
When does the voting end? It's 4-4 right now I believe, so we need more people to vote on this battle.
