Fire Safety Poem

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  1. Iggy

    Iggy Iggy

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    No problem... when your dying to freestyle or rap, you think of shiz easily haha.
     
  2. Karma

    Karma The Will Must Be Stronger Than The Skill

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    <div class="quote_poster">Quoting Iggy:</div><div class="quote_post">K I'm done!

    I made a 7 step plan part with what to do if you wake up during a fire.

    waking up during a fire is a tough pill to swallow,
    but if it happens, heres a few steps you can follow
    step 1: if you think you smell smoke, check in case do not assume
    it may be dark during a fire, so keep a flashlight handy in your room
    step 2: know your fire plan, and who you're designated to help out
    then safely check out your room and follow your fire escape route
    you may feel terrified, but your situation will never be dire
    step 3 is to bang on others' doors warning "FIRE! FIRE!"
    step 4: if you cant get out, dont panic everything will be okay
    because if planned everything right you should have an alternative way
    step 5: if you get out of your room, stay down like you are small
    remember to stay down, always fall and crawl
    step 6: dont go back for anything, all your posessions you can replace
    once your safely outside, go at your designated meeting place
    now that your safe from the fire, the worse is now done
    the final step is to go to a neighbors house to call 9-1-1

    here are a few extra lines i thought up.


    make sure you have smoke detectors on every floor in the house,
    if not you might end up with a fire to douse
    do not be afraid, stay calm and set your fears aside
    if you see a fire dont hide, just go OUTSIDE!
    if you think a rooms on fire check the knob with the back of your hand
    then follow procedures to the fire escape route that you've planned


    Tell me what you think!</div>

    You realize that you just did the guy's homework for him right? Regardless if you're freestylin or not. But hey, atleast your verse is better then his original one.

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    The others were powerpoints and stupid boring usual stuff.
    </div>

    Well, seeing as you had to take the trouble of singing on from your brother's account, posting a new topic and waiting 2 days or so for someone to completely help you out with a poem, wouldn't have it just been easier to do a powerpoint in the first place? What's so difficult about a powerpoint? Those things can make any presentation look slick if you put the effort into and make everything look nice.

    Anyways, be sure to tell us what you actually ended up getting on this though.
     
  3. Iggy

    Iggy Iggy

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    I enjoyed it. Hopefully Umair learns a few rhymes? haha
     
  4. umair

    umair "Never underestimate the heart of a champion."

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    Im his brother actually, Pakman on forums. Not really active though.

    So yeah.. reportin back to yall (not like most care but.. yeah) ..

    It went great, people thought it was creative and DIFFERENT that those boring powerpoints. Tell you the truth, there is only a certain level of creativity you can get to a powerpoint. Especially one about fire safety [​IMG] ...

    SO yeah, my project went smooth. Help was extremely appreciated. Btw - Junoon, whats wrong with helping out someone with their homework. Its not like I copied someone's math homework where Im not learning something and am putting myself on the risk of failing the test.

    Anyways, thanks Iggy.
    I prolly got a high A! or... maybe 100 - that teacher likes creativity [​IMG]

    -Pakman
     

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