Battle Discussion Thread (R.I.P.)

Ah man I f'in hate you J, I thought of that king of queens line on the bus. Aite i got backup though lol

 

What do yall think of my rap against Chutney?

 

<div class="quote_poster">Carter Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">What do yall think of my rap against Chutney?</div>
I don't think its going to cut it against Chutney homeboy.

 

my first shot at SMitty is up....

my first shot at SMitty is up....

 

I like this:

<div class="quote_poster">Quoting phundamentalz:</div><div class="quote_post">i'm coming at you more concentrated than grapefruit Minute Maid</div>

 

Any more comments on mine?

 

^Stay in school.

 

<div class="quote_poster">MrJ Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">^Stay in school.</div>

LOL, and any more comments about mine except stay in school? and dont quit your day job?

 

My battle is over, go ahead and vote.

 

^ Isn't it judges?

 

<div class="quote_poster">Air Fresh Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">My battle is over, go ahead and vote.</div>

the 3 judges are authentiq NTC and Locke

 

<div class="quote_poster">Swish15 Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">Yeah, pretty good CPaul. Definitely better than my first time.
Who do you think was the best so far?</div>

Iono Swish, haven't read all yet. But looks like AF has his victory in the bag, and you started off pretty strong too. I think you'll beat out Iggy. And Chutney will get Carter cuz Carter still hasn't gotten complex with his lines.

 

Aznx, good stuff man. I liked a lot of your lines and that was great for someone just starting out. I'm impressed.

 

<div class="quote_poster">Air Fresh Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">My battle is over, go ahead and vote.</div>

I voted.

I'll be using the same criteria for every battle, that way I can tell you guys what I thought in depth, and maybe you can use it to build on your battles coming up.

 

Posted my first verse against Swish15, any feedback?

 

Damn, Iggy came with a vengeance. He had a lot of play on words with some hard-hitting rebuttals. From the "lyrically impaired", to the slaughtering of cows, I was impressed. Probably the best verse of the tourney so far.

 

Thanks MrJ. You came out strong with your first verse too. That Kramer line had my laughing like crazy. You came into the battle and you hit hard.

 

<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">Aznx, good stuff man. I liked a lot of your lines and that was great for someone just starting out. I'm impressed.</div>
Thanks bro, you keep that up too.

 

Whoa, this seems like more of a lovefest than the trash talking we were doing yesterday.

 

<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">Whoa, this seems like more of a lovefest than the trash talking we were doing yesterday. </div>
Your rhymes suck.