Check your first verse, how do those words rhyme? I kno they dont have to rhyme, but protege and wade dont even sound like each other,
<div class="quote_poster">phunDamentalz Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">it sucks nah, just kidding, i presume that wasn't aimed at me.</div> Haha, I'll still whoop ya anyway. What does everyone think of my verse?
<div class="quote_poster">CPaulDWade#3 Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">^ yeah i do, but protege, then d. wade?</div> Jay and Wade kind of rhyme. Not exactly, but it's like what Junoon said, having exact nursery rhymes all the time limits creativity. It's not like he said D. Wade and Mutomob.
^ I guess cause thats something are proud about, so they think the other persons gonna be pissed when they tell em how "my team beat ur team" and that stuff
<div class="quote_poster">GotSkillz92 Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">lol knicks fans cant use that Team victory stuff. What do you guys think of my first verse?</div> It was pretty good, but as MR J pointed out, its a lil long/short in some places.
Your best lines, IMO: <div class="quote_poster">Quoting GotSkillz92:</div><div class="quote_post">Comparing yourself to Kevin James, Aint that a bitch You aint the king of queens but you do need a Lyrical Hitch</div> MrJ's last verse is pretty crazy. Best I've seen so far in the tournament. I loved how he turned around the Giants rhyme, with the Strahan one. And that finish was real creative.
<div class="quote_poster">Carter Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">Aight my last verse is posted. Tell me what you think and judges go vote.</div> I think you did ok for battling Chutney. You need to have more consistent line length.(I Need to work on it too) But yeah, good job. IMO Chutney won with this, he had consistent line length, it flowed, he was creative, and his lines and punchlines hit hard. Some of Carters lines just didnt cut it, but he did have his moments.
<div class="quote_poster">GotSkillz92 Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">lol knicks fans cant use that Team victory stuff. What do you guys think of my first verse?</div> totally sick man loved it Mr J started great also, but wow you came back with a VENGEANCE. I hope people don't not vote for you cause they have a problem with you or something they need to recognize whoever is the best
<div class="quote_poster">Carter Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">Aight my last verse is posted. Tell me what you think and judges go vote.</div> Rapping isn't for everybody man. I ain't trying to be a hater, but you raps need a lot of work.
<div class="quote_poster">B-22 Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">You can't tell Anzxs has never battled before.</div> True.
<div class="quote_poster">Air Fresh Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">Rapping isn't for everybody man. I ain't trying to be a hater, but you raps need a lot of work.</div> Don't trip bud, my raps aren't that bad. It just seems like they are cause I'm up against one of the best rappers on the site.
