2v2 Open Rap Battle (Air Fresh, Swish15 vs. Smitty, Chutney)

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  1. bbwSwish

    bbwSwish Harder. Better. Faster. Stronger.

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    <div class="quote_poster">Carter Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">Then we are going to die.</div>

    With that attitude and lack of confidence yes you will.
     
  2. Legacy

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    <div class="quote_poster">Air Fresh Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">You got the Champ vs the Runner Up, then two other tournament particpants against another two participants.</div>

    Yeah, I guess your right.
     
  3. bbwSwish

    bbwSwish Harder. Better. Faster. Stronger.

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    EDIT: Never mind let's just get started. You guys go first.
     
  4. Karma

    Karma The Will Must Be Stronger Than The Skill

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    <div class="quote_poster">Carter Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">Then we are going to die.</div>

    lol not really, I remember in the last tourney it took me atleast like 5 or 6 verses to get to the point where I actually thought my verses were nice. Swish almost beat me in the first battle, in case you guys dont remember, so no worries.
     
  5. bbwSwish

    bbwSwish Harder. Better. Faster. Stronger.

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    So Karma, are you in?
     
  6. Karma

    Karma The Will Must Be Stronger Than The Skill

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    K wait, I haven't read the whole thread but clear up some questions first:

    1. Do we alternate verses? Or it's one big verse? I think AF it's one big verse but just double checking. I think everyone should make their own verses and we all combine it, edit them, etc and post it as one big verse with each participant's name color coded from each team to make it easier.

    2. Do we just go after one of the other team's emcees? Or we attack them as a whole? It'd be better if it was a free for all, attack whoever you want but try to balance it.
     
  7. B.e.

    B.e. The One Who Score Touchdowns and Spikes Mics

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    <div class="quote_poster">Karma Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">K wait, I haven't read the whole thread but clear up some questions first:

    1. Do we alternate verses? Or it's one big verse? I think AF it's one big verse but just double checking. I think everyone should make their own verses and we all combine it, edit them, etc and post it as one big verse with each participant's name color coded from each team to make it easier.

    2. Do we just go after one of the other team's emcees? Or we attack them as a whole? It'd be better if it was a free for all, attack whoever you want but try to balance it.</div>

    A free for all would be sloppy, the whole point of teams is to work as a team to buld the best diss verse. A good idea for a free for all thing is to make a thread where you just go in and keystyle.

    One big verse peeps!! You down Karma?
     
  8. Karma

    Karma The Will Must Be Stronger Than The Skill

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    Yeah sure, count me in.
     
  9. B.e.

    B.e. The One Who Score Touchdowns and Spikes Mics

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    Lets get it crackin then.
     
  10. B.e.

    B.e. The One Who Score Touchdowns and Spikes Mics

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    <div class="quote_poster">Karma Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">Yeah sure, count me in.</div>

    You get my PM?
     
  11. Karma

    Karma The Will Must Be Stronger Than The Skill

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    Yeah, just checked it right now. I only got msn, don't use AIM.
     
  12. B.e.

    B.e. The One Who Score Touchdowns and Spikes Mics

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    <div class="quote_poster">Karma Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">Yeah, just checked it right now. I only got msn, don't use AIM.</div>

    Ok me and Swish got msn, I sent you mine...lets go! lol
     
  13. Smitty

    Smitty brush em off.

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    We'll be posting ours in a sec.
     
  14. Smitty

    Smitty brush em off.

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    Carter, Smitty, and Chutney: you gotta realize we can't be beat,
    We come in this thread ready to compete, and allergic to defeat,
    Do you realize what we’ve assembled? We’re the lyrical Goodfellas,
    Spitting so many deadly insults, we’ll have y’all running for umbrellas,
    Look at these losers Swish and Fresh: they managed to drag down Karma,
    But, we show no pity or remorse, when they bring in that soap opera drama,
    Such inflated ego’s, should we take them seriously? We don’t know,
    ‘Cuz it really ain’t tough to beat rap’s version of Larry, Curly and Moe?
    Y’all are misplaced, better suited to discuss whose hair to put in curls,
    How do we stay serious, when my sis thinks you’re the Powerpuff Girls?
    But, it’s too late to turn back: If you're that confident, start bringin’ the pain,
    Then we'll be like Shawn Kemp in his prime, and start lettin’ it Reign,
    While y’all show us why you don’t have enough time to catch babes,
    Practicing positions on each other found in pictures from Abu Ghraib,
    Y’all asking for more trouble than having unprotected sex in Africa,
    Challengers always come, but we “Kill ‘Em All” like Metallica,
    It ain’t gonna take much from us to make y’all submit,
    Sharpshootin’ all 3 of y’all, might as well give up and just quit,
    So we don’t expect much in return after we unleash our first attack,
    I mean, you’re star player claims to be Eric Foreman dressed up in black,
    Y’all unknowingly got a death wish for trying to take on our team,
    Just got washed down into the gutters by our lyrical streams.
     
  15. bbwSwish

    bbwSwish Harder. Better. Faster. Stronger.

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    <font color=""Blue"">AF-V, Karma, and Swish, you can try taking shots at The Team
    But we throwing them back at ya like Deke, Olajuwon, and Kareem
    On the other hand ya roster is weak, Carter don’t even have self esteem
    And right after some sorry 4 Bars Smitty will just run out of Steam
    The Powerpuff girls? Nah, we are more like the Legion of Doom
    Spit with that AK*, give you that Venom, and top it off with Junoon
    Manu Ginobili a$$ rhymes, therefore in the game all yall do is flop
    We got that North Pole Cold Flow, so in the game we the team on TOP </font>
    <font color=""Red"">Twenty-two bars and not one yo momma joke?
    I guess ya'll silenced Carter while the others ghostwrote.
    If ya’ll are allergic to defeat then you aint gonna survive
    We’ll have you itching and bitching and breakin out in hives
    Soap opera drama? In these conditions the Legion of Doom thrives
    All I know is this battle will be the worst Days of Your Lives
    You can’t turn back once you get caught in this vicious cycle
    I turn around shots better than Kobe and Michael*</font>
    <font color=""Green"">This team'll have ya wettin~ya~sheets while 'murderin rhymes'
    have ya restin~in~peace, one word at a time //
    We strikin~with~heat, how you likin~defeat?
    Knock Smitty verbally with rhymes, lace him right~in~his~teeth //
    I ain't gettin dragged down, my punches hard as a 'Rock',
    layin the 'smack down', makin all your heart's~arteries~stop //
    hop off the weed fam, cause the only thing that's blazin~is~rhymes
    Chutney, you're more then rusty, this battle's just a waste~of~my~time //
    talkin about lyrical streams~and~gutters; beatin us? your dreams~are~cluttered
    y'all so 'shook' even your verse seems~to~stutter //</font>

    *AK = Swish’s real name initials (Alex Kennedy)
    *Turn around shots = reverse your punchlines but since Kobe and Mike are famous for their turn around shots it's a play on words
    <font color=""Blue"">Blue=Air Fresh</font>
    <font color=""Red"">Red=Swish</font>
    <font color=""Green"">Green=Karma</font>
     
  16. Mr. J

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    If you didn't color-code the rhymes I still would've been able to firgure out who wrote which line.
     
  17. B.e.

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    Keep your little comments in the Discussion thread. Your just cluttering this thread up.
     
  18. bbwTwinTowers

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    So do we vote errrr
     
  19. Smitty

    Smitty brush em off.

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    Not yet.

    Chutney and Carter, yall need to get on MSN...
     
  20. Smitty

    Smitty brush em off.

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    <font color=""DarkRed"">It don?t mean sh!t that Karma was recruited to battle by Burt & Ernie,
    Cuz, the lame reincarnate dropped out to prepare for the Winter tourney,
    Your cartoonish ?Legion of Doom? has crumbled apart like the Berlin Wall,
    Can?t expect to be bailed out by Karma, so what?s really left of y?all?
    A pop rap fanatic who?s jealous of Baby and a Peter Vecsey copycat,
    Neither of them looks suited to match up against us in a lyrical combat,
    When there were 3 competitors on each side, your chances were legit,
    But you lost your star player and we no longer have Carter to babysit,
    Now we can truly unleash our skill, the power of two lyrical heavyweights,
    Our verses destroy your Saturday morning rhymes and darken your fates,
    We?ll leave you terminally ill and watch you get taken away in a gurney,
    Give you post-traumatic stress: you?ll only confront us through an attorney,
    Y?all are out of your element when placed into a lyrically hostile situation,
    Covering up weak lyrics by polluting verses with asterisks and punctuation,
    Colour-coded nonsense, it?s impossible to make sense of what y?all bring,
    We waited for a rebuttal, but it looks like Swish just made Iggy another sig,
    Y?all step up to us with transparent lyrics, but we ain?t the ones to incite,
    Talkin? ?bout ghostwriters when you might as well colour your own lyrics white,</font>
    <font color=""Navy"">AF shouldn't even be tryin? to diss my name, man,
    Sayin? I'm sorry when he's a Lil Wayne fan,
    Little Venom has some nerve messin' with me,
    Like I won't, give him a lyrical knockout like Muhammad Ali,
    That's all it takes, to bring y?all down to ya knees,
    Havin' y?all look like lil? boys seekin' a preist,
    Call yourselves the Legion of Doom? Then we're the NWA,
    Sprayin? these rhymes like a Tec 9, plus an AK
    Matter of fact, call me the Devil and I'll start bringin? the Heat,
    Scorchin' y?all like D-Wade, burnin? ya feet,
    Even if he tried, Swish wouldn't even air Diddy out,
    While I'll let it rain, and clear the city out,
    I'm lining em up, like a Tupac rap,
    Pickin? them off like a lyrical sniper with this freestyle crap,
    I didn't even go my hardest on y?all, I just gave y?all a sample,
    And y?all still got crushed, and lyrically trampled,
    Bring anyone, we'll murder them too,
    We spit it so sick with this lyrical flu,
    Be glad, we're done, finished with y?all fools,
    How does it feel now that y?all got less credibility
    than Ja Rule?</font>


    <font color=""DarkRed"">Chutney</font>
    <font color=""Navy"">Smitty</font>
     

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