Calling out Locke

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  1. Bleed Green

    Bleed Green NFLC nflcentral.net Member

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    You mustve misunderstood me when I said that I was takin Over
    Locke has to have some mental problems or maybe he just isn’t Sober
    Cuz he just spit 20 bars about straight trash and Canada
    Kid is More dilusional than Borat thinking he can get with Pamela
    You can write 10 pages but need to Save ammo aint that Funny?
    You're a bum rapper and since when has JBB become Just Butt Buddies?
    I was gonna take it easy but you’re begging for more
    My shits coming so Fresh, I’ll even get somes votes from your hometown of Singapore
    If rap was a currency and hot rhymes were a Dollar
    Son No joke, I think I would be about 10 g’s farther
    Backups don’t make you better Locke you should know by now
    They don’t rap for you but get some tips on How
    You’re witnessing a legend in the making, Einstein times 2
    I can be like Helen Keller but still school your whole Canadian crew
    J and Phun hold down the Kid Skillz because they know I go to work
    Queens and Harlem together show the true power of New York
    Opposite of Canada we’re known to be straight murderers
    That’s why its impossible to find someone here that hasn’t heard of us
     
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    This dude stayed up till 4 in the morning to think of a reply,
    while I improvise and drop all my sick rhymes on the fly.
    Your sleep deprivation must have caused some lyrical constipation,
    cuz that's the only reason why you're suffering from creative desperation.
    Memorizing my profile to find something to try to embarrass me about,
    when in fact there's no way you'll beat S.Dot's favorite son Lockedown.
    If you got anything else up your sleeve please don't hold back,
    because all my dope-ass replies got fiends higher than crack.
    I'm not mentally unstable just call me lyrically deranged,
    dropping more killer rhymes than the ol' school Big Daddy Kane.
    You claim to rep New York but your city's making no sound,
    seems like 9/11 really brought the big metropolis down,
    MrJ's the best out of NY, phun is second and you're a distant third,
    so with all your talk about being a legend really sounds very absurd.
    See, after those rankings were dropped you heard about the verdict,
    I'm not the only one who can't stand you, just ask authentiq.
    I gave you fair warning before that this ish was going to be worse,
    and after these twenty ill bars the world knows I kept my word.
    I'm sorry that was eighteen? I lose count when I'm in a zone,
    I got five Canadian Stocktons* to my one vintage Malone.

    * - (Iggy, Chutney, Karma, P.A.P, Bobcats)
     
  3. Iggy

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    Locke, why are you a judge? With that ill shix you should be a participant in the tourney!
     
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    <div class="quote_poster">Iggy Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">Locke, why are you a judge? With that ill shix you should be a participant in the tourney!</div>
    Lol I got no time for a whole tourney.

    You wanna go one more Gotskillz or just end it at this? Your choice.
     
  5. S.Livingston14

    S.Livingston14 JBB JustBBall Member

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    You dudes are thiiiiiiiiiiiirsty.
     
  6. Bleed Green

    Bleed Green NFLC nflcentral.net Member

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    I got one more. We agreed on 3.
     
  7. Trip

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    <div class="quote_poster">GotSkillz92 Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">I got one more. We agreed on 3.</div>
    Alright, drop it then. I'll try to wait around but I got family tonight, so I might have to reply tomorrow.
     
  8. Bleed Green

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    Aite no doubt, I gotta run to the store, ill start when I come back
     
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    My rhymes are coming furious, you can call me the man
    Your rhymes fade out while you sink deeper in2 my lyrical quicksand
    Little by Little my rhymes are digging deeper
    You’re struggling to get out, but the end is coming nearer
    I got a little bit tipsy but I still wrote 16 strong
    Showing you how JBB Rap is a place where you don’t really belong
    If you think you’re on the fly then I must be a Plane
    Im lyrically gifted, and like CH I’m Insane in the Brain
    You’re lyrically limited, Repeating verses and every line is the same
    Locke doesn’t compare to me, can’t you figure out the words in my name?
    Talking about 9/11 is forbidden, for that Locke has to Pay
    If you hate New York so much, then why do you compare yourself to Pap and BDK?
    New York produces sound like 5 loud Speakers
    Shivering your ears and wiping out the soles from under your sneakers
    Northern Country stays shitty and that’s being Generous
    Murdering your canada’s rap game like a pissed off terrorist
    GotSkillz reign continues, Locke was a stone in my path
    Hurdled over him and left the Canadian in a lyrical Bloodbath
     
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    Now before I deliver the knockout lemme make myself clear,
    I got no beef against New York or the people that live there.
    What I say in my rhymes sometimes can offend,
    but unless you're a little bitch-ass you'd understand,
    I'll admit I don't usually mean half the sh!t I say,
    but that excludes what I said about GotSkillz today.
    If the Source was to see this freestyle, I'd get five mics,
    You won't even come close to beating this cat if you got nine lives.
    The Gotskillz reign can't continue because it never began,
    it was all just hype then Air Fresh discredited you as a man.
    AF-Venom did you in first, now the boy Locke will be the second,
    Then in the tourney you'll be up against a force to be reckoned.
    Coincidentally your opponent is also a rapper from the Great North,
    so you better cross your fingers and pray he'll fall off his course.
    After that third loss to Chutney you'd better call out Carter or Umair,
    cuz that might be the only chance you got to sit in the winner's chair.
    Just like how Toronto rattled the Knicks last night, tonight will be the same,
    Canada will come out on top for the second consecutive day.
    That was the knockout, like a gentleman I'll admit it was fun,
    hopefully Gotskillz would've learned now by whom the game is run.
     
  11. Notorious

    Notorious JBB Fear is Death

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    <div class="quote_poster">GotSkillz92 Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">
    Canadians never rapped , how can you and me have Beef?
    You're north of the border rhymes are as retarted as your flag with the red leaf
    </div>

    <div class="quote_poster">GotSkillz92 Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">
    Cuz he just spit 20 bars about straight trash and Canada
    Kid is More dilusional than Borat thinking he can get with Pamela
    </div>

    Well, this was a close one too me, but i think Got skillz kinda came out strong(despite the anoying canada jokes) at least stronger then the other. Also Gotskillz had some killer lines,(the ones above).Locke had some real nice stuff, and wasnt completely based around"Canada>NYC" sometimes that get s anoying. Like i said, close, but i feel GotSkillz92 came out with it with his knockout lines

    <u>MY VOTE:GotSkillz92</u>
     
  12. Chutney

    Chutney MON-STRAWRRR!!1!

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    GotSkillz' best punchlines were better than Locke's best. In terms of creativity, both were fairly equal. The difference was in flow and consistency. Every one of Locke's lines led into the next. GotSkillz, on the other hand, had would have rhyme with different topics and none of them really matched each other. It was like a random jumble of insults. For example:

    <div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">My rhymes are coming furious, you can call me the man
    Your rhymes fade out while you sink deeper in2 my lyrical quicksand</div>

    or

    <div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">Northern Country stays shitty and that’s being Generous
    Murdering your canada’s rap game like a pissed off terrorist</div>

    They'd have like 3 different insults in them that weren't related to each other. Locke also had less filler lines.

    I vote for Locke.


    btw Locke, that 9/11 line was good. Spending 6 lines apologizing for it wasn't. You shouldn't be sorry for what you say in a battle, because its all an exaggeration anyways.
     
  13. Chuck

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    Both of you alls rhymes are tragic and monosyllabic.
     
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    Good Battle Locke, and yea i agree with you chutney about me staying on topic. i gotta work on that

    And come on guys start voting, I see a bunch of people viewing but not posting
     
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    <div class="quote_poster">Quoting Chutney:</div><div class="quote_post">
    btw Locke, that 9/11 line was good. Spending 6 lines apologizing for it wasn't. You shouldn't be sorry for what you say in a battle, because its all an exaggeration anyways.</div>Didn't want to alienate the NY voting population lol, and I thought it was a good way to start the verse off. I do think in retrospect now though that 6 lines was too much.
     
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    Come On People Vote
     
  17. Mamba

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    Locke came better in this battle. Gotskillz hate for Canada was annoying.
     
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    Give us a better reason.
     
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    <div class="quote_poster">CPaulDWade#3 Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">Well, this was a close one too me, but i think Got skillz kinda came out strong(despite the anoying canada jokes) at least stronger then the other. Also Gotskillz had some killer lines,(the ones above).Locke had some real nice stuff, and wasnt completely based around"Canada>NYC" sometimes that get s anoying. Like i said, close, but i feel GotSkillz92 came out with it with his knockout lines

    <u>MY VOTE:GotSkillz92</u></div>
    Exactly - those two lines for me jumped out as killer lines. Locke's rhymes proved he's a smart dude but they didn't sound as good as Gotskillz in terms of flow. Gotskillz loses a point for CH insane in the brain - it's like he squeezed CH in there to try and make it fit, then you have to figure out what CH is = oh okay Cypress HIll.
    But Locke also lost a point for saying "a force to be reckoned" - you're missing the word "with" - reckoned WITH - as it is it doesn't make much sense......good luck in the official winter tournament
    VOTE: Gotskillz92
     
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    Suprisingly, Gotskillz was pretty good in this battle, but also to my suprise..Locke had some decent stuff up his sleeve. But the lines that CPaul posted stuck out to me also..very nice.

    VOTE: Gotskillz.
     

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