Alright, well I agree with Locke. Gameface had some good material, but it wasn't really organized well within his lines. Since the judges are reading this instead of hearing it, you have to stay more consistent with the lengths of the lines so that they flow better. Also, I think some of your lines were borderline corny. Overall though, I would put GF in the 'above-average' category, in terms of what I've seen in the battles on here. I think the thing that put Fresh over the top was consistency. I didn't view any of his attacks as extraordinary, but I also didn't think he had any weak digs mixed up among his verses. All of his attacks and rebuttals were good, and his lines had a nice flow thoughout 95% of it. Only 2 or 3 of his rhymes seemed awkward, and there were only a few things that I didn't think rhymed that well. Overall, it was another solid battle for Fresh. And just in case I didn't make it clear enough, my vote goes to him.
Ok. This one goes to Air Fresh. I kinda thought the flow was lacking in some parts of the 'style. You coulda got in a multi or two in a few of the lines to better the keystyle, but it was still good overall. I suggest you also try to avoid making liners that really have no affliction to the opponent, and that you throw in some more punches. Personally, i thought GameFace was more creative in his wordplay and really threw that RJ line, however Gameface was a little inconsistent with his rhymes and if he had some more wordplay in the rhyme, he probably coulda taken this one. Close, but i still gotta go with Air Fresh.
