Poetry by Adonal Foyle

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  1. Chuck

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    Ambivalence

    I miss the cocks that shout out loud
    Arise, arise you wretched sloth.
    The day has dawned and passeth by
    Dragging night's drape across the cloud.

    I miss the beach, the sand that's pure.
    The water that makes the land secure.
    Its reef, a quilt with blinding hews,
    Adorns the painted mystic view.

    I miss the pain I ever hate
    Whips and ropes, my haunting fate.
    One does not only love the good,
    But grows in disdain, misunderstood.

    I miss the face of those trusted few.
    Whose love was but a weakness too.
    Home, illusion of bucolic paradise,
    The rosy dew, and stinging lies.


    A Place of Mystery

    Of time and place without a name
    Narrow paths and winding roads,
    Of secrets old and filled with shame,
    A falling star that no man hoards.

    If I sound foolish, cold and bleak,
    Judge me not with hate or scorn,
    Pity me. I fear what I seek,
    Unleash the raging passions born.

    How many went to that raw place?
    Where airballs and injuries roam.
    Even a child must run this race,
    To conquer thee, the masses moan.

    I end this query with shame and fear
    But look, there, nearer to the clear...
     
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    It's supposed to be funny guys.
     
  3. CLos

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    Did he actually write this?
     
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    <div class="quote_poster">CLos Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">Did he actually write this?</div>

    http://www.adonalfoyle.com/FC_poetry_corner.shtml

    Damn Sun

    Before I am ready, the sun climbs through
    the crevices of the door and settles on my eyes.

    I can smell the morning glory
    scuffling with balsam tea boiling on the fire,

    And when I open the door I taste the sea salt
    upon my lips. The chirping of the doctor bird.

    She sings, Rock of Ages cleft for me,
    Let me hide myself in thee.

    The guava tree sways, struck repeatedly
    by the breeze climbing gently off the ocean.

    Then warplanes explode across the sky
    as I seek a futile refuge beneath my bed.

    The United States invades Grenada.
    My world becomes a battleground.

    Who knows how these things get started
    But I will like to volunteer a few guesses.

    2.

    The evil Grenadian with communist intent
    Or Reagan social policies that's not worth a cent

    Whatever the excuse the masses accept
    The island was leveled with fighter jets

    Bishop and them were put in jail
    Do you know no one accepted their bail

    They went to the fort in handcuff
    And were shot in the head without much fuss

    Now I am not blaming the US for the deed
    That would be most unfortunate indeed

    Was it Castro's manipulative assistant
    The Grenadian cunning ploy of resistant

    Charles draws the US a backdoor map
    Manley's made sure there was no gap

    Code was the man who started the war
    Reagan wanted a sure victory from afar

    Adonal Foyle
    December 16, 2002
     
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    not bad for a gorilla (not because hes black)
     
  6. Dark Hero

    Dark Hero Can't Tell Me Nothing

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    There not very funny there like pathetic.
     
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    <div class="quote_poster">AirJordan Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">not bad for a gorilla</div>
    What kind of racist douchebag to say is this?
     
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    <div class="quote_poster">AirJordan Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">not bad for a gorilla</div>

    This more pathetic.[​IMG]
     
  9. AKIRA

    AKIRA GO LAKERS!!!

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    AirJordan you rascist, why did you say that? you know saying things like that gets you banned or suspended from JBB
     
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    <div class="quote_poster">AirJordan Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">not bad for a gorilla</div>

    [​IMG] Man I could see if you called him a dumba$$ but a gorilla?? Come on man.
     
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    ignore the comment, didnt mean it like that
     
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    You shouldn't have said that regardless if you weren't being racist.
     

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