Kanye West v.2

Is this any better?

 

I accually like the 1st one beter.

 

Well I was just listening to people's criticisms, it's a matter of preference I suppose.

 

I do like this one better..8.8/10

 

I think my choice of font is more appropriate.

 

Yea, the font is better on this one. It fits better with the more easy-going look you did on this wall

 

Looks better. Good font and text placement. I'm glad you re-did this because it looks much better!

 

Glad you think it's an improvement.

 

Nice wall bro....definately better then v1. 8/10Text could be better.

 

<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (Mav4life @ May 4 2006, 09:41 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>Nice wall bro....definately better then v1. 8/10Text could be better.</div>Thanks, what would you suggest I do for the text?

 

IMO it stands out alot....its good for it to stand out but it takes away alot of emphasis from the main picture because it is so dark....maybe lowering the opacity on the drop shadow and putting it on the right side.....also try some thing other then a gradient.....maybe a soft light on it...idk w.e works the best.

 

I don't know, I think it stand out just right, but maybe soft light or something could work too.

 

Lol I'm just saying...its all up to you though....

 

Yeah that's fine, I appreciate the feedback.