I think it came out pretty good. I really like the background that you did. The two main things that really mess it up is the text and right next to his hand on the right, it looks like he has a really big finger when in reality but I think that piece should not be there. I don't think it's a part of his hand so I think it should be cut from the pic. Also, I'm not really feeling the stroke but it looks ok. Another thing that you could probably try to fix is that Kanye's head blends in too much with the background....
