<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (RaptorFan#1 @ Jun 25 2007, 09:49 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>gentile freaking out hes intelligent philisophicallyim like a volcano spitting metaphoricallychewed up BBW and screwed wack rappers upbest rapper here man its all too muchlisten man im tired of your game15 minutes is up for you, say goodbye to famerhyme like papoose flow like wayneslapped you silly took over the first lanenaw this aint glory roadits called the rap game</div>I was dissin lil' Bluff but then I saw RF1,Making even the suckas say 'holy sh*t, son!'Dissin gentile's game? Man your rhymes are lameBitten, prewritten, your sh*t is all the sameLike I said, same sh*t, what don't you getLike I said, lame spit, sucka don't forgetThis is a rap battle thread, you the reason Hiphop is deadThe reason folks dread,turnin on the radio - hey me though,I got the breath of life, cutting flow like a knifeHope to spill some blood to teach life lessons, no messinSo learn from me, I'm the one that can teach youI'm also the one in a rap battle just beat you
<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (gentile @ Jun 26 2007, 08:40 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>Is this a diss? I really couldn't tell.</div> not really I just wanted to use metaphorically.
<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (7Goat @ Jun 26 2007, 11:12 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>I was dissin lil' Bluff but then I saw RF1,Making even the suckas say 'holy sh*t, son!'Dissin gentile's game? Man your rhymes are lameBitten, prewritten, your sh*t is all the sameLike I said, same sh*t, what don't you getLike I said, lame spit, sucka don't forgetThis is a rap battle thread, you the reason Hiphop is deadThe reason folks dread,turnin on the radio - hey me though,I got the breath of life, cutting flow like a knifeHope to spill some blood to teach life lessons, no messinSo learn from me, I'm the one that can teach youI'm also the one in a rap battle just beat you</div>beating a goat man this is too easyrappers naming themselves animals this making me queazylet me give you the anatomy of rap so you can understand itfirst on the chart is my flow not the crap you spittin man its all showthen comes rhymingand the perfect timingnumber one on billboards left weak rappers whiningforget the rap battle threadonly one MVP, thats enough saidI come in your ear louder than your speakagoat vs. rf1 guess whos weaka
<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (RaptorFan#1 @ Jun 26 2007, 03:10 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>beating a goat man this is too easyrappers naming themselves animals this making me queazylet me give you the anatomy of rap so you can understand itfirst on the chart is my flow not the crap you spittin man its all showthen comes rhymingand the perfect timingnumber one on billboards left weak rappers whiningforget the rap battle threadonly one MVP, thats enough saidI come in your ear louder than your speakagoat vs. rf1 guess whos weaka</div>That's right, I'm an animal, an all-out beastI used to have competition, now they're all deceasedYour anatomy had to be a catastropheThis cat spitting blasphemyMy style knows no father so it's bastardlyMost Valuable Poet, that award belongs to meBecause I rap like something you wish yours could beYeah my rap is all show, showing what rap should beThey're all saying, "could he make a rhyme like the last?"I step with heat on the stage and let my lyrics blastI gotta say in terms of rap you are a bi*ch to meForget about your rhymes, you're just history
In this game im a giant killin ya elfsBut no Benoit I aint killin myselfand when im in my fly car I aint chillin myselfyour chick in the passenger feelin herselfcause she know you lame and wants nothing but the bestshe wont leave me alone I cant seem to get no restand when it comes to my dick ya know she obsessedthis be the reason you be so depressedstep up your rhymes next time you want to battlethe reason I'm Oden and you number two like Durant in Seattle
yoyoinside dese walls I creep n I crawllookin fo a way outI know der wont be no easy routemy lyrics wen I waz in lookin thru 40 basLol jks
Bitches,dont you knwo I got powers like witches,turn on a muthafucking swtich,and have your ass leaving with metal stitches,ill give you all kinds of drugs that will give you the itchesJust like Smokey, in Friday, remember that film?you know, DBo, Craig and Pinkey the Pimp,and Dede with his BMW whip,gettin dented up by the chick who was pregnant with him,and the famous saying "DDDDDAAAAAAAAMMMMMMNNNNN"
Well, here I amin this thread for the very first timeI was reading some posts and and almost threw up in sublimeall over the screen, so I couldnt read what I seewhatever you said, I said it betteru like goat cheese, yes im chedderI like pringles, all types of chipsu gangsta? Ak47? all types of clipsIf you want to battle, go ahead throw me some linesI'll murder your rhymes a word at a timeaint no one on a level this highI tough heaven because I in the skyabove clouds, above planes, above you and your gamesIm above you...yes yes yes im above youmy lyrics I spit might crush u
You cant crush me, we know what crushes you do,you crush on little boys, all I gotta say is eeww,you suck up more cum than BBWs own jew(CB4),your part of the queer army, the proud and the few,I hope you like it from the back, cause youll be joining the butt-packer crew
<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (SirLaker @ Jul 24 2007, 02:19 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>Well, here I amin this thread for the very first timeI was reading some posts and and almost threw up in sublimeall over the screen, so I couldnt read what I seewhatever you said, I said it betteru like goat cheese, yes im chedderI like pringles, all types of chipsu gangsta? Ak47? all types of clipsIf you want to battle, go ahead throw me some linesI'll murder your rhymes a word at a timeaint no one on a level this highI tough heaven because I in the skyabove clouds, above planes, above you and your gamesIm above you...yes yes yes im above youmy lyrics I spit might crush u</div>My rhymes are Goat cheese, 'cause when I wrote theseI made your mom lactate (eww) so jeez, take some notes pleaseBut I'm a Goat in a diff'rent senseNot past tense, but the Greatest of the latestSo I'm sorry to say this, but you're defeatedSirLaker's conceited, but at the same time he cheatedI think you stole your lyrics from young Joc, I'm young PacMy lyrical flow will leave your body shellshockedIt's all lies for you, man nothing's trueBy the time this battle's over you'll be rolling in that bull pooLet me put it in other words, to even the most faith-eistIf you was God the whole world'd be atheistsShabang
<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (P0W3RBALLIN @ Mar 14 2007, 10:24 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>I wrote that. </div>I copied that here is sh*tray allen is the best3 point shooterin the leagueOHHHHHHHH
Wow... 7Goat is the only person that can spit well in here... He actually seems like he knows what to do in a battle unlike the rest of you... I used to rap but quit a while ago... read this and then come back when you understand how to make hard hitting punchlines...These are the things you need to incorporate into your verses...punchlines - lines that make you go "OooOOOoohhhHHhh"personals - if it has relevance with your opponent and how well you use it to your advantagemultis - to check your multi-syllabic rhyming usage (eg. rabbit food/grab it dude)wordplay - how well you use your words creativelymetaphors - how often and how effective you use similies, puns, reference, etcflow - how well your lines flow throughout in lengthcontent - whether you're using fillers, or if your stuff is too generic (example: bling bling), or how casually your words are combined
Honestly, how do you know if somebody is a good freestlyer by READING it. Half the stuff I post wouldnt sound right to you, but with my accent or the way I say it, it flows very well together.
Haha, me and my friends freestyle(im the only one who listens to rap outside of Three 6 Mafia btw) and I kill them. Im pretty good...just sound funny.
<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE </div><div class='quotemain'>Honestly, how do you know if somebody is a good freestlyer by READING it. Half the stuff I post wouldnt sound right to you, but with my accent or the way I say it, it flows very well together.</div>when you do it on a forum its called keystyling... and if your actually good at it... you would be able to make it flow
no...most rappers cant do that...cause of their accent..I personaly say certain words different;y than yall so what you hear when you read it isnt the same I hear.
<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (BluffCityBlue @ Jul 24 2007, 10:59 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>Honestly, how do you know if somebody is a good freestlyer by READING it. Half the stuff I post wouldnt sound right to you, but with my accent or the way I say it, it flows very well together.</div>Sounds complicated, but you have to type it in a way that's understandable to read in a rhythm. Can't really explain it past that point.And PB I liked the basketball analogy you got going on. Someone should reply to mine
