Not bad- The text works as well.but I just dont like the 2nd pic - I think you shud keep it but just fix it to make it look a little better...do some different effects with it.
I like the text but not much on this sig. Make the sig fit the text more. lol odd sayin that. Its very good I think tho.Try making all that white stuff including text overlay-setting and lower the dots/splatters opacity a bit. I'm not sayin the sh*t would be better just curious if it would. or just lower the opacity in normal.
I tried that and it's really hard to read... and there's already a stroke around it.I'm going to retry all this and make it better tomorrow.