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It feels like it's missing something.Help is appreciated.

 

Pick a different text for one. EDIT: Also, I suggest you make it a bit brighter.

 

Thanks for the comment, I'll add a volume 2 later.

 

v2: v3: I know the text in v3 sucks, I was just trying new things.Is it any better?

 

I like the idea in V3 more but like you said the text is not very good. Keep at it! :happy0144:

 

v2's the best but the text blinds you...or maybe it's because I've been playign xbox live for 7 straight hours...choose different colors for text.

 

idk BG looks little bit to plain for me .

 

I'm not so sure I like the coloring in this one.

 

<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (joemagoo362 @ Jan 3 2007, 02:51 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>I'm not so sure I like the coloring in this one.</div>I think thats your best one of all the versions.

 

<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (joemagoo362 @ Jan 3 2007, 01:51 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>I'm not so sure I like the coloring in this one.</div>This version is trippy with the 'old TV' look to it... plus he's got all this redness around his mouth.

 

<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (7Goat @ Jan 3 2007, 09:34 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>This version is trippy with the 'old TV' look to it... plus he's got all this redness around his mouth.</div>Yeah could you fix the blood lol and then could I use it?

 

If you want to use it go ahead.I fixed the redness best I could.