Ben Gordon Wall [KCX]

I know its abit too similar to my first one but im still trying to get used to this style. any feedback is welcome and thanks for looking.

 

I don't really like this, sorry.The background needs some kind of texture, especially with the text you use. To me it just looks like 3 pictures, some red and yellow spots, and some text.

 

alright fair enough, thanks for commenting so fast

 

Get a better render cause that one isn't cut so well. The text doesn't really fit the feel of the wall.

 

eh its an ok wall - I think you should try to find a diff style other than the skyline thing.