its one of your better ones. I would add more lighting on the render and then the left side background could use alittle more detail
the right side was fine before and the contrast was fine. what you should trying doing is take a white soft round brush with a decent size that almost covers the head.. make a dot at the top of the helmit- glaussion blur it- then set it to color dodge. that would give the render enough lighting imo.
That's with the lighting technique you advised.BTW KCX thanks for the advice, I really appreciate it.
I like v.3 the best - but I thought the biggest problem for you was the text - I like how you tried to be creative - but the Irons text doesn't look good skewed. The color isnt that good either.I think u should redo the text totally with a new font/colors.Other than that - the sig is maybe one of your best.
font is a hard thing to judge. not many people can get it down perfectly but the best way is to just keep testing them out. I cant really help out too much with text because im not good at it.
The text needs to blend in more, only thing I see that is bad. Decent sig, you are getting better though.
