Nice. It's real original, it looks nice, etc...You might want to raise the text a little bit because the p looks like an o kind of...
The Text is terrible on all of them.It actually be sick if u added the color back to the main picture and made it better quality
when you follow a tut, don't do everything exactly like the tut or else you'll never be able to use your own creativity. it definitely looks like you just took the psd and put your things in it and left the rest the same, and if you did that is considered ripping.