I read them all, and they're good. If anything they are good poems, dunno how you rap so its hard to imagine...
I read the first two then stopped lol. Not that they are bad but I just don't feel like reading through all of them. There definetly not bad at all though. I loved this part of I Rap<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE </div><div class='quotemain'>Not really reppin' my city, because I don't support the hyphyNot making slappers to slap just so the slappers like meI'm a classic like the Nikes, wanna lyrically fight meSpitting dangerous bars at me, whatever that might beBecause words don't hurt, unless you add sticks and stonesSo I add em to my words and leave you sick to ya bonesIt gives me a reason to own, my own kind of voiceThe messages spread because I rap for my own choice</div>
I cant believe you cant find a way to record those though, my friend Big Atone borrowed some chicks phone(it has a recorder), went into the bathroom and put down 100 bars and sent it to a email, downloaded it at the school computer and he put it on a floppy disk, saved it on his computer and burnt it on a CD...haha...
Haha, hopefully you can get in the booth...the quality of Atones bars were horrible...he actually got a promo CD now(of course made in a booth though), he goes to Walmarts and try to sell them for $10 :biggrin: HUSTLA!
Some man with an evil plan will steal these lyrics and make it into the big world by themselves and take credit... :nasty:
I have lots of stuff written down by my bed, but I don't really wanna share them haha. But yours are nice. The semi rhymes are awesome, I like using those abstract rhyme patterns
<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (tHe_pEsTiLeNcE @ Jun 22 2007, 12:06 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>they definitely seem more in the realm of poetry than hiphop, but as poetry they are nice.</div>No. He seems to be developing a CL Smooth "Straighten It Out" style with the consecutive long lines. That's how it sounds when I read it. With minimal syllable deletion and playing with his style more, he could also sound like Grand Puba. It takes a virtuoso to really master that style, though.Edit: Verse one of "Just One" is bananas. He definitely touching the rim with that one.
