I'm not really feeling this at all. The bg is too busy and the Young text is horrible. I was also gonna say the render is too blury but I see you sharpened it in V2
I like this a lot...the only thing I would suggest is to switch up the two objects...as in, switch the positioning of the text with the player...so player first, than text. I think it makes more sense that way...and I think it would flow better. Other than that...excellent job on this - the BG IS busy, but it looks good that way.
thanks here is v3V3:made vince stick out more with lighting effects and made the sig lighterand ill get on switching them round