Vince Young

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  1. KingJames23

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    here is 2 versions of vince young V1:[​IMG]V2:[​IMG]C&C?
     
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    I'm not really feeling this at all. The bg is too busy and the Young text is horrible. I was also gonna say the render is too blury but I see you sharpened it in V2
     
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    thanks for the tip man
     
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    on V2 erase the sharpened on the BG and text, but leave it on VY.
     
  5. KingJames23

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    alright illmake a updated version
     
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    I like this a lot...the only thing I would suggest is to switch up the two objects...as in, switch the positioning of the text with the player...so player first, than text. I think it makes more sense that way...and I think it would flow better. Other than that...excellent job on this - the BG IS busy, but it looks good that way.
     
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    thanks here is v3V3:[​IMG]made vince stick out more with lighting effects and made the sig lighterand ill get on switching them round
     

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