well my post got wiped cos of that failure so I'm gonna put this back up as I didnt get much feedback... its also been changed and I got rid of that lens flare on it
Yeah, good job getting rid of the lighting flare. It looks very nice, it could probably use more color, but that's the style. You did a nice job.
I think it's a step back from your Rihanna one. I don't really like all of the lighting on the right side of the render, and the signature itself has a weird size to it...