Looks good bro but you really need to start focusing on text more. I like the duplicated renders and the shapes inbetween them, good execution on that part. The lighting is sort of all over the place though, try to put some sort of placement for it..
<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (l?ckdown @ Jul 24 2007, 02:28 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>yeah like I said before, my text is lacking :/</div>Duplicate your text layers and retartersize(sp?) them. By doing that you can add blurs, and filters, etc. My text improved once I started doing that.
<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (l?ckdown @ Jul 24 2007, 01:59 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>I tried that before, but never thought of filters, thx will try that next time.</div>the fragment filter works great and lower the opacity on that behind the text on color dodge - I do that all the time...