murs

http://www.o2designz.com/forum/uploads/U37-1185424665.jpgreally a work in progress. I really need some comments.

 

haha thats pretty goofy lookin, but still cool. I like the text. Just color in the BG is really the biggest thing, but Im sure you were getting to that....

 

I know its a wall and negative space is really important, but I do think the render needs to be bigger, or duplicate the render and make them smaller to fill up the mid area a bitit's pretty good IMO, just a little 2 much emptiness on the left

 

that was the size of the original render. its tough to find hq pics of him.

 

im sayin if you can make a mini render of him and put it around there, it wont look worse, because its smaller but it will add more in the middle

 

http://www.o2designz.com/forum/uploads/U37-1185427794.jpgupdated.EDIT: I get what you're saying im just not feeling it.

 

I liked v1 more but its lacks depth in the bg

 

I like v2 more, adding that effect added alot to it, I like it