She Builds Quick Machines

Not as good as DC's sig, but I like it. Easily my best work. C&C?

 

Text, text, and text. A little unorganized too

 

That's a great song. Yeah, text needs alot of work and to me, it looks a little bit unorganized and overcontrasted. In saying that, Yeah you're probably right this is one is one of the best I've seen from you. Decent sig. Keep working at it man, you'll get there.

 

Hows V2?

 

That's a lot better. Still a little picky with the text though, maybe some lighting around the render, and I think some coloring to cool it down would be nice too

 

Sig looks a little dirt and grainy. Smoothen it up by bluring some stocks. but yes your best

 

Thanks for all of the tips guys. V3 up.

 

easily your best. great work. text is my only major complaint.