Sweetness Wall

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  1. FroztyE

    FroztyE NFLC nflcentral.net Member

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    Ok so here goes...Im gonna start posting some of my work and see what you all think. Rate it for me, give me some tips tell me whatever it is you think I need to do to my work..I have done walls before but I havent done one in a really long time...so here it is:VRS 1.0[​IMG]VRS 2.0[​IMG]Let me know what ya think!
     
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    Not bad, background kinda solid, i don't really like the text but i can realize you're back starting to make more now. Hopefully more people can come here and make walls with you.
     
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    <div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (FroztyE @ Feb 11 2006, 07:12 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>Ok so here goes...Im gonna start posting some of my work and see what you all think. Rate it for me, give me some tips tell me whatever it is you think I need to do to my work..I have done walls before but I havent done one in a really long time...so here it is:http://img139.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sweetness0dl.jpgLet me know what ya think!</div>Talent runs in the family...The top half of the wallpaper is a solid 8/10. I like the orange and the simplicity of the BG, I like the gradual fading out of it...maybe a few more details in the bg would be nice though.The bottom half of the wallpaper is a 5/10. I dont like how it gets so 'cloudy' or the greyness to it. The logo looks awful and the text could use some work.
     
  4. Frosty J

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    Not bad....like i said the top logo looks out of place tone the scan lines down a but and get rid of the greyish looking gradient.....also the logo at the bottem dont look right it would be better if u would just take that out also maybe change the font choice for "The Legend" thing....well keep on making GFX u will get the hang of it over time
     
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    i like the top half alot but dont like the gray , black i would like more
     
  6. FroztyE

    FroztyE NFLC nflcentral.net Member

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    Version 2 is now posted!
     
  7. Frosty J

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    Version 2 is better my only complaint is that the logo stands out a bit to much lower the opacity a bit
     
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    <div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (Frosty J @ Feb 12 2006, 01:26 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>Version 2 is better my only complaint is that the logo stands out a bit to much lower the opacity a bit</div>What he said.V2 is very nice man.Good job.
     
  9. Frosty M

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    like V2 much better!
     
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    Version 2 is amazing. The only Bear i liked and will ever like .
     
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    Only complaint really on the first one is how it gets all grey towards the bottom, it like ruins the wall a bit.No complaints really on the 2nd wall. Good work [​IMG]
     

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