I would have made it less yellow if you know what I mean, that's so bright it's almost annoying to look at. I guess the textwork is better than your usual but it still needs some more help. Work on those 2 things.
<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (Johnny White Guy @ Jul 2 2006, 01:00 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>I would have made it less yellow if you know what I mean, that's so bright it's almost annoying to look at. I guess the textwork is better than your usual but it still needs some more help. Work on those 2 things.</div><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (ST34LTH @ Jul 2 2006, 05:15 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>Always Finds A Way To Smile? A little tacky...</div>Both of these are what I was thinking. If you had made the yellow less, well, less yellow, it would be awesome.
