Ike Taylor

Like I told you for your Ward one, the yellow is too bright it needs to be toned down a bit and you need to mess with your textwork a little more, I'd recommend sticking to the same font all throughout, but if you can't, try to make it less than 3 different ones like you do here.

 

Yea yellow is kinda hard to get right because if I tone it down it gets greenish or orange. As for the fonts I liked it at first, but the more I look at it the more I think you're right.

 

Instead of yellow why don't you make it a darker color, even black works with Pittsburgh's colors.

 

Kinda hard to work with black unless you mix up both

 

take the Ward sig he's using for example, it's black and looks much nicer. It's easier on the eyes.

 

<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (Johnny White Guy @ Jul 4 2006, 12:29 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>take the Ward sig he's using for example, it's black and looks much nicer. It's easier on the eyes.</div>Took the words right out of my mouth.

 

Yep, still too yellow. Just try brushing a lot less and in the spots you hit there. Then, it should be very good. Also, the text is hideous on that :ninja: