Jason Campbell

Looking for any feedback, thanks

 

This looks pretty nice. The BG is really dull so that's what I would work on the most. The text looks alright.. Render effect looks ok. I would just work on pimpin out the bg with b/c layers, gradient maps, and lighting.

 

whats a b/c layer

 

Here's my final version, I think it looks better

 

Much better. A B/C layer is a brightness contrast layer. that way you can up the contrast on your sig which makes the lighting better. I would stick another one on there as of now (be sure not to overdo it though).It looks like you're getting your touch back though. Good job.

 

I like V2's BG and V1's text. Nice job man. That looks gnarly.

 

Put V2's bg w/ V1's text and you have a nice sig. Good comeback sig.