Actually not feeling this as much as some of your other stuff. The light right next to his head really throws it off and the pattern on the left is annoying to me..Don't read too much into what I say though.. I basically hold some people at higher standards than others and therefore expect more from them.
Well, you are right in a way, but I think the problem would be solved if he just moved the pic into the light there. Not sure if it would look better or not, just an idea.