There's parts I really really like, like the part around the pic (the effect is awesome BTW), and there are some parts that are just too plain.
This one has so much potential. I love the start to it. My few comments would be I don't really like the stock of the Road being so low quality and I don't really care for the text. A little more detail would be nice. But this thing just has so much potential that you should keep working on it.