My First Attempt

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  1. C.Ronaldo

    C.Ronaldo Key Squad player

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    Comments please.
     
  2. echo369

    echo369 DYC Squad rotation player

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    dont really like it.. dont really like the text.. pic isnt that bad but bit dodgy quality.. brushe used isnt that good.. 6/10 for me
     
  3. Lennon 18

    Lennon 18 DYC Key Squad player

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    Tell him why you dont like Echo FFS!

    We'll Ronaldo Its a good attempt at your "first" sig. I dont like the text it is too grungey also you should put the splatter brushes to overlay or softlight or lower the opacity. More brushing over the city stock would make the background better. Render look like it has noise applied to it. Good attempt KIU[​IMG]
     
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    echo369 DYC Squad rotation player

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    i did say why i didnt like it.. i said i didnt like the text, pic was bad quality and didnt like the use of the brush..
     
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    For a first attempt it's pretty nice. Background is a nice touch.

    Is he Greendays Lead singer/Guitarist???
     
  6. echo369

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    yes he is..
     
  7. twofivefive

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    It's not bad for a first. IMO the background and even the BJA cut are too grainy, it'd look a bit better if it wasn't as grainy or not at all but still with effects. The colour of the guitar doesn't really fit in with the rest of the sig, maybe if you coloured it a dark red or a grey-ish red it'd look better. Text is nice and fits well but like the rest of the sig it's too grainy.
     
  8. Hudge

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    Not bad for a first but I don't like the forward slashes after the word Joe.
     

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