First Wall (56K Killer)

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  1. Hot Sauce

    Hot Sauce JBB JustBBall Member

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    First wall, tips?
     
  2. Courtking

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    I like it for a first wall, I need to strat making walls soon...8.5/10
     
  3. JJA

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    Not thta bad, on the red strip though, I would suggest lowering the opacity of the boxes, then it will look better IMO. Also, the boxes look all wierd.. like they go infront of soem ppl's body parts but not others? lol.
     
  4. Sex Panther

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    Yeah, i thought the boxes were too big. but the images (all the D-Mase images) look fantastic. It's all good but the box thing, maybe ou could add opacity to some of the re background's features to add a simplicity look to it. Overall, it's good though. 8.2/10
     
  5. P.A.P.

    P.A.P. JBB Fresh Start

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    Real nice for your first sig 9/10 (first sig criteria). I would change the red box to something like Purple or Green, to match his team colors.
     
  6. Hot Sauce

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    ***EDITED***

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  7. Rim-Rocca

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    dont really like the new one that much, i dont like the yellow. but its good for first, 8.5/10 for first and 8 for the second.
     
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    The edited one is better. I would of just changed the Red part only to Purple or Green, but it's still nice. There's some cropping errors on the main pic, but they're minor...Good job on the walls.
     
  9. Hot Sauce

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    Thanks. [​IMG]
     
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    Are you sure this is your first wall. Because this is really, really good. I think the blurring of the pictures are great. I like your choice of font. I like the simplicity of the text. For a beginner this is amazing. I would rate it a 9/10.
     
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    Yeah, first wall. [​IMG]

    Thanks for all ya comments people.
     
  12. Sex Panther

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    i doubt it's his first wallpaper. it's too good [​IMG]
     
  13. Hot Sauce

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    *blush*
    You guys just sayin that to make me feel good...[​IMG]
     
  14. TnNeG

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    yeah its nice [​IMG] i like the first one. i dont really like the red part though i think you used wayy too many pics in there. dont like the text either. the second i like but i think you need to make the yellow darker or something then it would look mucchh better
    1st: 7/10
    2nd: 7.5/10 (would get an 8 from me but the yellow is too bright, IMO needs to be darker)
     
  15. TimFlem

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    Since this is your first wall I'll give you some tips that will make your next better. First thing I see wrong is the main pic. It shouldn't be there since he's on the bucks and your text says now and then meaning the team he's on now should be the main pic and his older team faded,not black and white becuase that looks ugly with all those colors. Also the blur on the black and white pics isn't needed and really takes away from this. Also you should take your time and crop the pics as perfect as possible. Here it seems you rushed a bit on that. Also in the bar you have some pics of him but they aren't properly blended becuase i can see the line seperating them. Hit up some tuts on blending and try to remake that. Also the main pic needs some contrast so it won't look so poor and u should fade the grid as much as possible in the bar. I like the text with some more time,details,and effort this could be a really cool wall.
     
  16. rjnavarrete

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    Anyone know where I can get a pic or PSD of that big D-Mase pic in the background wiht the rewind bucks jersey? Thanks.
     
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    I am not shure if this has been said yet but in the middle with the bar, Blend those pictures into one, it would look smoother. I am sorry if that was already said.
     
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    <div class="quote_poster">Quoting RJ 21:</div><div class="quote_post">Anyone know where I can get a pic or PSD of that big D-Mase pic in the background wiht the rewind bucks jersey? Thanks.</div>You mean this one?
     

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