Tim Duncan - FOCUSED

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  1. rjnavarrete

    rjnavarrete BBW Member

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    A wall inspired by a Nana wall I saw the other day (He inspired some of the typography layout). Let me know what you think. Took a while finding two 'focused' images, but I think I did a good job of finding two very similar ones at different angles. [​IMG] Please post comments/criticism!!


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    rjnavarrete, Apr 13, 2005
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    I really like the text here but the little square/circle things are being overused now and I would say this would look better without them. The picture needs to stand out more as well. And why red?
     
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    Backgrounds good with the squares but like CourtKing said, Red??? I like that pic also and the font and text...8.5/10.
     
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    How's this?

    Ver. 2:

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    Much better, I like the plain and simpleness of it...dime.
     
    Apollo, Apr 14, 2005
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    Final Version:

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    rjnavarrete, Apr 14, 2005
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    I like the 2nd v. better.
     
    Apollo, Apr 15, 2005
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    I like the second version better... I like how all the colors match... it's pretty good... the text seems kind of...r andom for me... like the rounded rectangle shape of the box it's in. Overall it's nice tho. [​IMG]
     
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