I don't know for some reason I like everything but your text. I'm not sure why but it's either the colors or the type of text you used. I'm not sure which one....
I like it, your text is improving but still not up to par. But like I said you are improving,so nice job.
THANKS..I like this text..Its prolly gonna be one of my last time using it tho cuz ive used it alot..