guhh, mardy dont wanna be a douche to ya, like your work and all , but this is just... bad, everything :/ are you fu*kin around or something?
no I mean im experiencing with new stuff but I dont see how this is bad? I know the text is different then most of you all are seeing, but im trying to develop new stuff since my text layouts were all the same.I honestly don't see what is so bad with this?
Its not bad at all. Its not great, but it isn't terrible. Two suggestions would be to change the text, I applaud you for switching things up but it doesn't look great. Also, bring the render out a little bit more. I've seen better from you, but it isn't bad.
2 me its just a big step down, im all up for tryin new sh*tbut even if you take out the text is just looks beginnerish to me, the render looks likes its lq to me at leastit looks like the render is just slapped on there like it wasn't placed in rightthe bg just doesn't look good with the render, maybe its the placement of the render or somethingthe only thing that is good is the coloringnot saying its horrible, but its just not that good 2 me considering your other work that was pretty dam sick right before thisbut its all up to the eye of the beholder I guess
Yeah the render looks absolutely terrible here. Very oversaturated/oversharpened. Love the coloring but the text is wack.
