Edgerrin James

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  1. LIEY8

    LIEY8 NFLC nflcentral.net Member

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    This is only my third wallpaper ever so take it easy. I've just started making them and I realized how fun they are. Don't be afraid to give me crticism becasue I'm looking to change it to make it better.[​IMG]C+C?
     
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    The bg is cool, but it seems too red. Other than that and the text this is pretty nice.
     
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    What he said. And the cropping is kinda messed up..
     
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    I'm actually feeling the redness of this, just fix up the text and touch up on the cropping a bit. Not bad.
     
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    Few things are hurting it.Practice Jersey PicBad TextAnd it needs a bit more in the coloring or the lighting, becuase its too red IMO.
     
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    I'll do a V2 sometime this week.
     
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