That's my first wall ever, I know that background needs some help and I need to change the text on Franchise, gimme some comments please.
Since this is your first I'm going to help you on a few things. 1. The pic of francis is just floating there put him on the ground by adding a reflection, and a floor so what to speak,look up a tut on that if need be,2. The motion blur on francis isn;t needed,why?,becuase he's posing there not in motion(it's also too big of a motion blur)3. You have thiis twirl that's in a box,the box needs to go and somehow put the twirl in the whole wall or something. Like you've said your font needs some work, so just work on those things to make this wall better.
