ok I tried to improve... looked at some tuts... I think my render is better... im stilll finding it hard to get good backgrounds... anyway please give some feedback... dont just say its rubbish... tell me how to improve... thanks
Lower the opacity on the scan lines a bit, erase some parts around render, text is really bad...stands out a bit too much and is just kinda thrown on randomly there.I think the background is pretty good and the render is a good choice. Just do what I said and it would look a lot better. :dribble:
