Good evening, my name is Mr. Bullet

V2CnC

 

This could be so dam good. The render is tight, but it wasn't executed so hot. The render is okay, but the bg needs more, and the text can be better. If you fix this up it can be really good.

 

I need ideas...

 

I'd darken the sides a bit, bring out the render more, and add a pattern or two to give it depth.

 

Pretty nice but... I would say bring out the render more and maybe lower the opacity on the original render used in the background because it seems to ruin it a bit... and throw a stock of some cobble stone or something over everything at a very low opacity but to give little gritty bits that stand out but obvz erase in areas like text and main render (basically where it looks bad)... just an idea...

 

Added a V2... didnt change much.

 

Needs some lighting effects, it's not bad though. You just gotta get more creative.