criticism: that b/g is tight, everything else sucks the quality of the kmart pic isnt that great, and that font is ugly 8/10 for the b/g, 6/10 for the rest
You could tell that the pic of KMart has been enlarged, and although that the background is nice, the whole thing looks a bit empty, and the font is not really the best for this picture.
lmao that had me laughing so hard. Not because of how bad it was (it's actually okay, some things need work though), but because of what the font says and the picture of KMart. It looks just funny to me. The things that need work are the font (change it) the pic (get a better pic cause that one wa stretched to much), and the cropping needs a bit of work.
Background is mad tight. But everything else is pretty bad. The pic is bad(looks like he was just kicked in the nads with some like 9 inch heels), and the cropping for K-Mart makes even worse then what i already was. And the font is pretty bad. I would rate it a 5.75/10. I look forward to seeing you grow as a designer though. Keep working at it.
From a graphics standpoint: 6/10 From a personal standpoint: 10/10 I love it!... but it isn't desktop wallpaper material. The text for the pic is great.
