You did a fantastic job on the render, but the background is a bit too busy for me and not a fan of the text. pretty good sig, though.
Nice - I see you're trying to use the A1- style with the c4d bursts. Looks good - the c4d looks really well blended.
It looks amazing!! Nice work. Just take out the text because right now, that's what's killing the sig. Who knows, it might even be better textless....
sh*t look like some kobe movie comin out transformerish. Tight!! You've been researching and practicing like a mad man.