Wow - this could def be your best if you spend some more time on it - this has some major potential. The BG is just sick!I would really wanna collab here with u - this looks nice.Ok: my suggestions:1. Text: a. It's too plain with just that color - believe it or not make it hot pink lol - than add a drop shadow with that same exact color you've got there and make it visible. Change the angle so it's just slightly diagnal. b. The sub text could def be improved - change the font and pic a better pixel text - just make it a solid white with a possible gradient if it looks good.c. This is experimental - but add huge cursive lettered text that says Kweli. You'll put that in the BG on a very, very light opacity - it will also be on overlay.2. Render:a. The render is too low - move it up a lot.b. Figure out a way to make the top of his head not white - make it so you can see it.Those are my suggestions with just looking at it - I'd probably have tons more things to do if I could work on it.Awesome job!
I couldn't get the white spot off his head, and I didn't move the render up because its not a cut, and I didn't feel like cutting kweli out of the picture.If you want to collab I'll upload the psd.