Looks good man, just not feelen the BG too much, purple on one side black on the other, too plain on both. Not bad though
This is better but as usual the text is lacking. All of your text looks the same even on walls. My only advice would be to forget everything you knew about text and start over cuz this style is just not doing it whatsoever.Pic and effect are nice. BG looks like buildings to me. Add some thin line gradients, blurred shapes, pentool etc in there.