It's nice but in future you should just link to things as big as this. IMO the cut and text should be brighter, but apart from that it's pretty good for a first wallpaper. The sun type thing in the background looks really good too, as well as the Fabregas which is blended in well all over. Like I said, the only faults are that it's too dark for my liking. Nice though.
Not bad for your first. I like the shape in the bg, the text looks great but could be a little brighter. Around the edge of his right leg (our left) it looks a bit dark. Overall pretty good for your first attempt.
Not bad for a first time !! But the cut is really bad (look at the shoes) and the wallpaper needs more effects !! 6.5/10