GEt someone who is good with text to add some and it would look perfect! Great gob, it looks really cool.
BG is better and not as plain as usual so that's an improvement. The pic stands out though just a little too much. Try bleding it in a little betterwhere it still stands out but just not as much. Also send the psd to someone like reppin whos good with text and ask them to help you out w/ it like 7goat suggested