- The text needs a lot of work. A change of font and the effect on "Barber" would help- Should probably put the small render of Barber under the main render. Overall it looks pretty good, but it needs a couple tweaks to make it look really nice..
<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (The Captain @ Jul 17 2007, 11:34 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>Think I should use this for the Tourney? </div>nice job.. but text...
The picture effect is overdone. Ronde Text needs a lot of work.Everything else is good though.I might of made the render smaller, but that is my opinion.
It looks great...just fix the text, and fix the coloring on his face...it looks a little too burned. Not sure if this would work, maybe you could use some soft white brushing on his face to lighten it up.
<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (Camby23Land @ Jul 17 2007, 10:41 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>I might of made the render smaller, but that is my opinion.</div>^Pretty much agree with that.Also, the barber text on overlay or whatever looks really bad. I'd just re-do text all together if I were you. Its pretty good though. I can tell you're improving.
Version 3-I tried to add some more depth to the sig, and I fixed up the text. I darkened it a little more as well.
