sean williams sig part deux

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I'm trying to figure out how to blend my image with an overall artistic asthetic, so I encourage blunt comments and criticisms; I'm trying to get better. Also, I know that the text of "Williams" is cut off, I meant to do this, so that it would draw attention to the back fo the jersey.</p>

However if you were lost by this, or it just doesn't sit with you, let me know!</p>

thanks,</p>

GMJ</p>

 

If you think about it for a minute, the "i" looks like a giant snot coming out of his nose.</p>

 

haha that is a fair complaint. Anyone else?</p>

 

Lol ghoti,</p>

You should make the Sean Williams font smaller so It will fit and look better. (I know you meant to cut it off)</p>

Or put Sean and leave it like that so they would then read the jersey and read Williams. And after put it together Sean Williams. </p>

 

Also a good idea. I've updated the image to account for both inputs. Thanks guys!</p>

(newest image is in my sig)</p>