Yes, the text is actually great, just make the subtext a lil more readable.AWESOME sig..maybe try-out??
I agree that this textwork is a lot better than ur usual, if you were going to do anything else to it all you really would wanna do is make it stick out more, make it easier to see cuz it blends too much with the bg in it's white color. As for the rest of your sig, bitchin as usual, you've been coming up with some great stuff as of late with your style. I agree that you should try out for the crew soon, you're looken good and keep improving.
You know what? I see some M2D in you. Its good, and bad. Good because its a sick style, bad because its not original. but overall, sick sig.
